>>1885473Thanks for the quick reply. I appreciate your advice. The only reason I didn't taper the lines on her face pieces is because they are part of a mechanical helmet and not a bandage, i wanted them to look more mechanical but I'm not sure I succeeded... I'll try it tapered and see how it looks.
I knew there was something wrong with the eyes and that's definitely it.
As for the colouring, yes this is an older anime and I was working off this old and badly edited image, so I tried to play around with colours from a scan instead to make it look more like it did in the VN. I think it's pretty close, and any more saturation would be untrue to the original.
This is the image i was working off of for reference.
