>>1674638Its looking a lot better, but a few things still seem off to me. The left pupil seems slightly off, and the eyes are a bit too close together now.
Theres a bit too much depth being shown on the shading. The contrast between tones is also too high, causing the sunburn effect. Again pardon my crude photoshops, I just think you have a great vector and potential winner and I want to see you succeed.
