>>1461009Sorry for the late reply I was catching up on my massive sleep debt.
The blur helps a little but the problem with the sweaters is that the lines are bad you did them with the stroke tool without understanding how to make the strokes work for you.
In the image I posted you will see two rows of lines that you could use for the sweater, The first is with shapes and the 2nd is with strokes.
The advantage of shapes is if you copy and paste some of them and scaling them down the line width changes dynamically this is a subtle effect that makes it look like the smaller lines are farther back, the advantage of strokes is its a little easier.
Also if you use strokes you need to make sure that every node has adjustment bars coming off both sides of the node or you get that little shape point you can see in all of your sweater.
>>1461053Its better you just have a few smaller mistakes the most obvious being the fringe on the big lock of hair in front.
Also ignore the face
its just something I was playing with.
