>>1870104Not bad, but here are some things to consider.
On areas like the face and mouth, you have the curves a little lumpy. Try spreading the handles more to make those areas curve smoother, or removing extra nodes close by, if you have any. Always work with less and add more later, if needed. The hands also have a similar issue. You always want to be working toward less squarish fingertips, in order to give it a more feminine look.
In terms of thickness issues, there are a few. The back of the head is thinner at a couple places. Check the distance between your nodes. The collar area is thicker than the rest of the clothing. Try to match the rest of the clothing to that collar thickness. The hand thickness is much too thin. You need to think about depth when working on an image. If something is closer to the screen, then the thickness should be thicker. It looks out of place when you have thicker lineart farther towards the back of an image, and thinner at the front.
Anything else circled but not mentioned are either bad tips or inconsistency issues.
