>>1618393Late reply but sounds good, hope you post it whenever you fix it.
>>1618420A lot of color and that makes the icons sort of hard to make out. If you could make the icons monochrome or higher opacity it might work, and I'd get rid of the four up on her chest or get rid of the row on the bottom. Maybe change the battery color in your status bar. 7/10
>>1618455I don't understand what you mean by "I can't seem to fix it", you could probably just do a render of pic related as your render is pretty bad (the screen on the far left is a good example of that). I know it was mentioned in the last thread but please fix that 4chan icon too. It looks decent but those two things really stand out.
>>1618462Pretty nice, the clock/date/battery/weather layout seems kind of haphazard but in general it's alright to look at. 7/10
>>16184657.5/10, kinda boring but whatever.
>>1618472I'd get rid of the drop shadow on the clock as it's sort of distracting and unnecessary, and maybe drop the "Sayaka Miki" on the right side of the banner. Pretty nice though, and muh KyouSaya. 8/10
>>1618493Work on a new layout. Nothing matches, everything is kind of hard to see, and the icons have a strange black outline to them. Could work, but it's just really messy as it is. 6/10
