>>2081397In the process of fixing the peeking colors you created 3 new ones and ignored one of the ones I pointed out...
1. The right breast still has transparency to it.
2. Color is peeking out on the right arm.
3. Left of her neck there is a line that doesn't quite reach where it is supposed to.
4. On the little bead on top of the star on the hat there is some color peeking.
The right circle near here leg has a crescent that should have the tips made a bit thicker. I feel they're a bit small.
Left green circle is a line with a bit of color peeking out where the lines meet.
You need to get into the habit of checking things once over with a colored background (dark green, or something not found in the original art's pallete) in order to spot these kinds of mistakes.