>>1834193>>1834195Many areas of your lineart look lumpy and inconsistent, especially in the hair. Only place nodes at the endpoints and the the V tips. Play with the handles and try to see if you get the curve to that of the original. If you can't only then add a pair of nodes to take its place. Many of the hair pieces also do not curve properly to that of the original. Pay close attention when shaping hair lines, as you want it to curve in the same direction from the beginning all the way to the end. For the bells, use less nodes as well, mainly for the band and the middle part. You want the middle to be smooth instead of lumpy, so do not place nodes at the center. Instead, place the nodes farther out, and use the handles to shape and bend the middle part. The shaded shapes under her neck are supposed to be lineart. The coloring for the skin lineart is far too faded. Make it a darker brown so that it complements the black, or make all the lineart black as it is in the original (or both).
Coloring is also fairly faded, and many of the shadows lost all emphasis when you changed them to gradients. Many, especially on the dress, also have bad banding, as the color does not spread smoothly. The heavily gradient blue part of the dress also contrasts with the solid shading white part. Make those gradients normal flat colors like they are in the original. For the hands, add in the fingernails. For the eyes, you're missing highlights, and the highlights at the tops of the eye should not have lineart around them, and they should be above the lineart. The eyebrows above should have lineart and a fill. The face is also very faded and should have a mixture of fills and gradients. The bell under her neck should not have the brown shadow. The big highlight under the right ear should not be drawn as one shape. Draw about 5-6 shapes like the highlights on the other side, but moved close together and overlapping to create the effect.
