>>1697211This guy
>>1696984 again. For one, you may want to use
http://i.imgur.com/0NY8N0L.jpg as a better source. It should help with the eye details.
However, even with a proper gradient, the eye still looks out of place without the full combination of eyebrows, eye folds, and a nose. This example is with it fully colored to show how much more the expression elsewhere effects the eyes.
I may seem overly pedantic, but the eyes are an important focus for me, and if it lacks quality, they really shouldn't be there in the first place. The OR will probably be fine with it, so I guess you can ignore this message anyway.