>>2081069>>2081364To start with, as
>>2081383 said you missed some details, don't forget to add the blush on her face as well. You also missed some of the shading on the bag. I circled some spots that have overlaps or some color where it shouldn't be in pic related. Line thickness should be looked over as well, it's kinda inconsistent and quite a few just seem way to thick. All in all it looks pretty good but definitely work on the line thickness, when you compare it to the source image they are super thick. Also something that has helped me tremendously is to make sure on your lines to keep your nodes and handles parallel, it helps with consistency and you get smother lines that won't look jagged.
