>>1461433>With his limitations, it's excellent.No excuse. You can use a game pad, a mouse or a tablet to make god vectors. What really makes a good vector is to not "shove them out in a few hours" and acvtually TAKE the time to maker the piece look good.
So far, the "technique" he is using for lines IS all over the place - there are no consistencies with his lines. It is not stylistic to the piece. It is NOT showing effort into making something people would want.
I'll be posting more constructive criticism after I have had my breakfast (and hopefully caught the AKB live stream), pointing out where he'll need to fix....
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>>1461426: Decent overall, btu still has some flaws. If you want me to revisit these, let me know (P.S. - Make a version where she is in full noon type light, so peopel can use the vector other places than just a dark colored background...)
And just for reference: here is *MY* first vector...