>>1855139That anon would be me. It's looking much better already, I can see that you are working your nodes in pairs now. Like
>>1855142 said, you need to keep the thickness consistent throughout your lineart. That said, you can play with it to give some elements some focus (thicker outline) or giving them depth (thinner to thicker for farther to closer). Thickness consistency can be pretty hard at first but with time and practice you'll get better at it. I've attached an example of how I'd do the thickness on what you are working on. If you need, I can put up a twitch stream and answer some of the questions you might have.
