>>1673744Couple of points I think might be worth looking over (Red is for errors and Yellow for lineart issues):
-Haven't seen the original coloring but the parts of her eyebrows that aren't hidden under her hair seem like they should be in opaque blue and not half transparent.
-Might look better without the nostril.
-Again, not sure if it's intentional but I feel that the shiny middle part on the diamonds would be better in solid white rather than full transparent.
-Again, haven't seen the original but for the knots at her neck, it looks like their centers could be empty and show part of the collar under them.
-Just over over her left boob, part of the color for the dress is missing.
-Shading on the lace arm band thing right under her left forearm should be dark gray instead of dark brown.
-The transparency effect for the ruffles in her dress is nice but you forgot it on some of them.
-Again, the outline defining her hips should be thicker.
-There's a lot of room for improvement on how you use gradients. You should use them in a more crisp or solid fashion and try and cover less shading degrees with just a single gradient. You'll definitely get better as you experiment more with them.
Otherwise, I love the pupils and her eyes overall. I also really like the translucent effect of the diamonds. Good job on those.
