>>1465021Couldve sword i've seen this done before (just rin) cant seem to locate it though. Seconding.
>>1465124Been watching your updates, and I appreciate the amount of time spent on it. the fact you transitioned a sketchy fan art to something that solid and your own design.
There are a few criticisms i have though - the left side of her face (her right) where the flower is looks like an ear when i think its part of the flower, either scrap that entirely (cover with hair) or change it to a golden leaf of the flower. I miss the highlights of the hair, but the gradient you have doesnt look bad. I think her hair is a tad more green though. I also wish her skin tone was a bit more golden, shes looking rather pale for being in that outfit. The eyes i'm picky on and its really my personal preference, but i'd shrink the pupils and blend the color more in a tricolor tone and really accentuate the white shine of the eyes. Keep the hearts of course, i just drew over them to show what i mean. I think the pattern fill in the jewelry is really cool. Theres a few shadows in the face that are missing, eyebrow and face. The breasts are something I think need slight adjustment, they dont really hang like that for her size and look strange. Other than that, I miss the color in the bikini top. I also added some color gradients i thought might look a bit more saturated for the hair, skin, and skirt. I used 3 "stops" in the skirt gradient, for reference.
