>>1553572Some suggestions to help take out some of the issues you might be having. The yellow shows where I would have made subtle changes to the arc so the lines joined better. (kept as strokes, just to show the outline)
Also the purple shows how subtle of a change in the hair lines I would have made (using the blunt ends you used) to keep it a bit more rounded and not as pointy on the ends, which is the one place I can see that throws off some of the lines.
The best examples of where you did great consistent work is the feet - even though they are slightly off to each other, they are consistent within themselves - the points, arcs, etc all line up properly.
Hope this helps and gives some insights to you...