>>1354331To add what I already said: upon checking, the only other thing I really see as off are the lines intersecting her hair - they look forced, instead of "flowing" as they are in the original source. You might want to retrace them to be a bit closer to the original. I bet that will take away a lot of what you perceive as "wrong" with the image.
I should have read further, but I was focusing on the eyes and mouth, as pointed out in your original thread.
Hope this helps.
