>>1352915More things off:
The shadow color on the left eye - it doesn't line up with the rest of the whites.
The line that is on her neck, near the hair is also kinky and not smooth/fluid.
Both lines for the eyes are to "wibbly" they look like blobs instead of eyes. Staying with the eyes, the pupils, and irises all have differing distances between each edge, instead of being uniform, for example: Say the eye should be ( O ) on both, the eye is (O ) or (( o) ) which ruins the whole effect of the eyes altogether.
Hope this helps.
