>>1524673It's decent. There's a couple of instances of Mary Sue going down, but then if you remember that the writer was like 15 or 16 at the time and that the episodes of the anime are actually not in the order they're written...
There were really only one bad instance of Mary Sue: the last episode in the first game. With a rewrite that only changes the how and not the what (same exact end result), you could actually write out the entirety of it.
Go ahead and give it a shot, it's pretty good imo.
Anyways, a more backgroundy version of
>>1518548Dunno, I just don't like white backgrounds. They remind me of how badly I need to clean my screen, and are just painfully bright.
