>>1614553>Elegante>those icons5/10, get a new clock and an icon pack that fits your color scheme, right now there's too many colors. Maybe work on your layout/get an app folder as well. Nice wall, though.
>>1614517It's kinda cramped and everything is up in the top/left but it doesn't look awful, so I'd keep it I guess. Looks overall pretty good, 8/10.
>>1614565It's fine then, since your wall is so dark anyways. The font is really...er, "plain", I guess? It looks like Arial or some other generic sans-serif font. If it doesn't bother you keep it but check dafont for other fonts (I'd recommend something like WeblySleek UI or Segoe UI or something).
>>1614578Nice, especially liking the clock. As for your homescreen, the white divider bars would look better if they were solid/clean like the rest of your layout instead of glowy; you could make them like the edges of your widgets otherwise. The icons are too close to the navbar as well. In your widgets it would probably look best if all the text was white since the wall isn't there to carry the red together (if that makes sense) and the notification number (the 43) seems really big. The widgets are otherwise really nicely done, and I like the music player, though the white glow behind the album art is questionable. All in all, solid 9/10.
>>1614603>dfc>delicious flat chestI thought everybody on 4chan knew what that meant.
>>1614628Yeah, though the yellow seems out of place. I'd maybe use a the pink/red from the girl's hair. As for the right screen, the layout is nice. The way the icons block the wall is iffy. Maybe have four icons lined up on the bottom, app folder included, and put the other icons in the folder? It would look pretty cool if you put everything in the app folder so it was the only icon, too, I dunno. It's your phone though, so I'm just going on a tangent at this point. Looks overall pretty good, 8/10.
