>>1749250It's not too bad when in comparison. Again, the hair can still curve more. They still look rather straight and without direction. This is also very evident in the eye, with the eyelashes. Always assume something is curving in some direction. It is harder to see for the eyes due to the lighting and the low resolution, but you can tell if you squint. You also don't have to remove the eye to make it better. You just have to make your eye better.
Some of the clothing is too rough. You want nodes to express folds in the clothing, but there are either too many nodes, or they are not smooth enough. Play with them more. The hoodie isn't so bad in yours, so try to mimic the smoothness onto the other clothes.
Here is a reference as to what I mean. Also, please stop >>talking like this. It is retarded.