>>6213303Bit too empty for me. I'd switch up the clock and remove the page indicator. I'd also cut down on the number of screens cause I doubt you need that many.
>>6213356Pretty standard, simple /wg/ rice. Other than maybe having another look at the wallpaper texture, I don't have any suggestions.
>>6213454Very bad. Throw it out and start again. Look at other nice rices and the guides. You want consistency in your icons and they need to tie in well with the wallpaper and any widgets you use.
>>6213461Boring wallpaper, the dock background doesn't fit, that icon in the bottom right triggers my autism.
>9gagOh, that explains it.
>>6213508Lacks consistency. The widgets are ugly and look weird cause they don't stretch across the whole screen. Wallpaper doesn't fit the heavy reliance on white. The icons are too near the bottom, raise them up so they're more centered between the music widget and the bottom of the screen. Switch up the wallpaper.
>>6213601Hideously faux-stock. Try ricing it first, then post it.
>>6213936Clean. Even with the blur the icons are hard to see.
Graph did it better :^)
>>6213963Remove the page indicator. Sort out icon and widget placement so it doesn't clash with the wallpaper like that. Said icons and widget aren't anything too interesting either.
>>6214006Bring the icons up a bit. Change the colours of the music widget, if you can't then get a different player.
>>6214013Center your boxes better. The music box is further from the top of the outer box than the messages box is. I'm not a fan of text 'icons' but it's up to you, I guess
>>6214104The google search bar is ugly. The clock widget doesn't fit and is very cluttered (you don't need to know which ROM you're using every time you look at your homescreen). The icons are too close to the bottom of the screen considering the space above them. They also clash with the light background and are harder to see. The notification bar is ugly I'd hide it.
