So... I kinda gave up on this one, it's way off from my original vision and has two very conflicting styles. I """finished"""" it up to some point but I feel like I'm gonna move to a new project very soon. Probably making better use of that snake pape, I really ended up digging it. Still, ratings appreciated.
>>7797892 8/10Sleek, some colors lack contrast from the pape but that's a nitpick. Icons kinda conflict with the aesthetic tho. Maybe try colorized versions of white icon packs? If this is KLWP it's easy to pull off.
>>7797588 8/10Not a fan of the rounded boxes within the circle and since they're so present, that's unfortunately really striking. I'd abuse the whole circle thing going on for those widgets. Love how it changes colors tho.
>>7797171 2/10Cute pape, no effort tho.
>>7796951 3/10Little effort. Black on white over a colored background looks ass.
>>7796872 7/10Not a fan of the colors, but it's got.. style I suppose.
>>7796733 3/10Bad! At the very least get appealing icons.
>>7796713 7/10Sleek widgets, but somehow I don't feel it matches that pape.
>>7796658 5/10Lil boring... Can't see the icons at the bottom either.
>>7795443 5/10Two clocks and two battery indicators. The icons don't match the theme. I think if you work on it a bit more you can get that pape feel more special. Right now the only thing that feels related to it is the pixel text.
>>7795366 5/10It ain't much but it looks OK. I feel like pure white is kinda lazy for this though.
>>7795288 4/10Feels like a lockscreen. OK fonts but come on, it's empty.
>>7795232 4/10Cute pic. For low-effort improvements I'd either change to sharper-looking icons or rounder-looking font, so they look like they fit together. Right now they don't mix too well. After that, some transparent dark frame on the icons/text to improve readability.
If you wanna give it more time, play around with icon positions so they feel in harmony with the wallpaper.