OP here, trying out some different wallpapers. With the way it is set up, I think it needs a focal point in the center of the wallpaper for it to look good but I'm having a hard time finding any wallpapers I like. Let me know what you think or if you have any suggestions. So far my favorite is the one on the far right.
>>59116668.5/10 maybe change the clock font like other anons said, otherwise its great.
>>59116705/10
Everything is too large and cluttered although I might just be too OCD to like it.
>>59116869/10
I would just darken the background the tiniest little bit so that the apps stand out a little but more, otherwise it looks great.
>>59117044/10
On the right track, just sort of lazy. Also change your app drawer icon.
>>5911906Two clocks/10
>>59119075/10
Move the apps a tiny but further away from the edges and get rid of page indicator.
>>59119188/10
Not my personal favorite wallpaper but the layout is objectively well done.
>>5912012Two clocks/10
Get rid of the labels under the apps, you should be able to tell what the app is just from the icon, that's the point of the icons. Also get rid of the page indicator and the notification bar.
>>59120227/10
What the other anon said, just space out the apps a little bit.
>>59120299/10
Very well done, extra points for making an iPhone look so good.
>>5912122Two clocks/10
Ugly icons, out of place black bar, definitely needs some work.
>>59121409/10
I love it, I would just darken your background a tiny bit so that the text pops a little more.
>>59121587.5/10
I love the icons, I would just move them slightly closer together and maybe use a different clock widget, that one isn't my favorite.
>>5912203Jesus christ/10
Background is way too noisy, can barely see some of your apps. Get rid of labels and use a different icon pack, find a better looking music widget and get rid of notification bar. This one needs a lot of work.