Just threw this together, definitely a work in progress. Thoughts?
>>6935096Overall nice layout, although the palette is pretty washed out, it could use a little contrast, maybe a darker background or font? Also I don't feel like the font doesn't really work, but that's more a personal thing. P good, 7/10
Very simple, and not a fan of how light the top half of the screen is vs the bottom, but it works. 6/10
>>6934504Too minimal for my tastes, but objectively not bad, v nicely stylised. Appreciate that you actually put a fair amount of icons on your homescreen unlike most meme papers, 8/10
>>6934312Really like the dock on the bottom, this thing is fuckin beautiful. My only gripe is I feel like the info in the top right is a little cluttered due to lack of space, but that's p much it, 9/10
>>6934254As simple as this one is, I really fucking like it. I enjoy the unique color palette, other than the on screen buttons Lookin a lil out of place, it's good. 8/10
>>6934143Usually not a fan of these clusterfucked video game papes, but this one is actually fairly coherent. You could always take the time to maybe remove the top bar and make a clock that matches the style more, 6/10
If you feel like I skipped ya, it's cos you didn't rate. We're all here to get better, a little constructive criticism is expected and appreciated.
