needed to go back to something highly functional so i updated this one
>>7463217>the last thread was a jokejust like your screen :^)
for real though you need to think about the spacing, shits all wack. Text stacks and icon margins specifically. Your rounded corners also aren't the most visually pleasing things around, aim for optical balance instead.
>>7463137the quote and image are such a bad juxtaposition, they just flat out don't work with each other. Also the super clean clock on top of the fuzzy text is no good.
like the idea with the overlap though.
>>7463110this font should be added to the "don't use" list. along with that fucking camera icon.
>>7463101a fair pape does not a nice homescreen make
>>7462905the first image was nicer
>>7463088would you mind sharing the pape? i dig it. same with the idea but i feel like you could execute it better. really commit to the style, use more of the screen, maybe discolour the icons. purple boxes in top term are kinda random.
>>7463002everything is so biiiiiiiiiig
>>7462988go all out, do all the icons in the same style, take some inspo from the series. you have a decent start so keep fleshing it out.
>>7462879top part just doesn't really jam. the sizing is off, while the bottom part is uniform and lines up. The contrast between the two is p jarring, i don't even really want to look at the top.
nice car though, how was the track day?
>>7462857i love this. what do the top right numbers and dots indicate? calendar is cool, but not gimmicky, everything just works.
i'm calling best in thread already, this is great.
>>7463240D for Deffort
it would be cool if each of the background letters had a dropshadow to really distinguish them from others, that would also allow for layering and playing with depth, idk if that would fry your phone though lol.
