>>6744418I actually have cryten lying around, so I tried it out. Wasn't thinking circles for this one but I think it looks pretty good.
>>6744356It looks kind of basic and professional. It's not bad or wrong, but almost feels kind of like a stock launcher to me.
>>6744575Looks pretty good to me. It's nice and clean, nothing visibly wrong with it. It's kind of a typical setup, maybe that's what feels off.
>>6744684Not bad at all for a first time. I'd make the boxes a little thinner and go with a different clock font. Not sure how much I like the icons being surrounded when some aren't centered.
>>6744689That icon layout is still a mess. You need to lose the folders and use less icons on your home screen. That's what the app drawer is for. 9-12 icons should be the max you'd want on there. I also think the paper is too busy to go with that kind of monochromatic look. The icons and background get all mixed up as is. You should never have to strain to see what's going on with the home screen and I feel like I do with this one. I would also not use the default KLWP theme. Learn to make your own and stick to simple things to start. Finally, you've got two clocks even is one is analog and one is digital. Hide that status bar. Don't mean to be so nitpicky and I know it's your first rice, but it could use some constructive criticism.