>>58985628/10 I would just change the colour of the day to a dark brown, like all the other text. Not too sure about icon opacity, but it should be possible to extract the image files themselves and adjust the opacity in photoshop or something.
>>58985646.5/10 It would look a lot better without the boxes around the icons, and the notification bar needs to be hidden as well.
>>5898623>>5898625>>58986288/10 Looks great, the calendar and music player doesn't really fit with the theme though.
>>58987067/10 The layout of everything looks good, just change the wallpaper to something simpler and that contrasts more with the clock/weather.
>>58988326/10 Has too many icons. Get rid of the ones you use the least, decrease the opacity of the buttons on the poweramp widget, and, if you have enough space, maybe add a clock widget and remove the notification bar.