Mine is based off someone's I saw somewhere else.
>>60982778/10 I'd suggest getting rid of the background on those widgets and maybe placing a vertical line as a separator instead.
>>60982797/10 just declutter the top widget.
>>60984597.5/10 hide the top bar and move the widget a smidge up.
>>60984685/10 IMO. Needs a subject or focus and top bar needs to be hidden
>>60986939/10 maybe move the clock slightly lower if you can to match the margin with the bottom icons
>>60990988/10 I'd use less icons and maybe move the clock lower.
>>60991389/10 not my taste but can't find anything wrong.
>>60997238.5/10 maybe use less icons but other than that, another flawless.
>>60997418/10 icons look great but are hard to see in some spots of the photo, as well as the widget. Maybe move the clock up and darken it, also get rid of the pages shower thing above the dock. Great use of dock btw.
>>60999319/10 great, spacing of icons slightly off, trying moving the wallpaper slightly to the left.
>>61003217.5/10 great use of wallpaper. Find an icon pack that contrasts more and find a way to create a focus and it'd be perfect in my book.
