This shouldn't be on /w/, should it? It's a video game, although it IS in anime style. third and fourth screens are the widgets that appear when you click the tiny clock and music icons, respectively.
>>5644135Do you only have those two pages? The indicator is kind of off-putting for me at least. I'm a big fan of minimal though - that being said, your icons don't seem to together just-so either. I suggest utilizing a gesture (or my personal favorite - a home gesture to open a gesture launcher) to still have quick access to some of your favorite apps.
>>5644195Honestly not too impressed by the Icons on the dock - literally here, I suppose. Lose the icons on the lock screen - or change them into something more subtle - moving them might help that for sure too. I guess to me your icon placement in general makes the icons just kind of stick out a little too much, instead of being a part of the home, I love the theme though.