>>55070663/10. Visible app folders (make it 1 icon), too many icons, poor wallpaper, 2 clocks, crowded.
>>55068465/10. If you could make the notification bar transparent it would look better. Make the folders one icon.
>>55067673/10. Great picture, makes for a terrible wallpaper. 2 clocks, not even bothering to change the labels on folders, crowded.
>>55066205/10. Remove "minimalism". The top is really blank, making it feel off balance.
>>55066186/10. I know there are clocks out there that you can tilt to make it run up the comet trail, rather than be squashed to one side and making it uneven. You may need to change the wallpaper.
>>55065947/10. Seconding the smaller grid size. The random abstract shapes in the sky don't look good.
Mine. The top bar icons pop up windows of related apps and actions.