Here, have some actual critiques.
>>6916611There's a good idea here, but the colors don't quite feel right. Overall too bright, I think. Either darken the dominant blue to create more contrast with the island, or make the island itself a darker shade to stand out against the bright blue.
>>6916678The caption is a bit on the nose. I feel like, if you're going to get philosophical with synthwave, it should stick more to the cars-n-neon theme. Which, speaking of, it could use more neon.
Not bad for first attempts, though.