>>72146318/10 - Really nice. To make it look slightly cleaner, I'd get rid of all of the >'s.
>>72146339/10 - Really well done, it looks super clean. Maybe change the font to something like Helvetica, because (for me at least) the digital look of the font clashes a bit with the circle.
>>7214833>>72148367/10 - Not really my sort of thing, but it's simple, clean, and looks like it does the job. Main critique I have is the background on the first wallpaper doesn't look to be true black while the second does. Going into Photoshop or whatever and quickly changing that will make it look a lot better just because of the uniformity between the two.
>>72149149/10 - Very well done. If you can, see if you can get white pixel-art icons just so they fit better with everything else.
>>72153379.5/10 - Very nice. Not sure if you can, but maybe add a soft blur in each of the boxes. Changing the colour of the music progress bar to the same sort of blueish colour which you see in the wallpaper would make it look slightly better too IMO.
>>72154049.5/10 - This is great. Only real nitpick that comes to mind is really more of a personal preference thing, but I think the clock should be a bit bigger, or done in a way which makes it the first thing the eye is drawn to. Even something as simple as having the date in one of the top corners across a single line, with the clock in the opposite corner, and charge level above (what I assume is) the app drawer button.
>>72156906/10 - All looks a bit too cramped for my liking. Maybe try hiding the bottom buttons?
With mine I'm currently tossing up between two wallpapers, both I think work really well. It's either this one, which has more empty space at the bottom for the clock and such...