>>58931729.5/10
Can't think of anything in particular that I would change. Custom ROM?
>>58931695/10
Wallpaper needs to be more interesting (maybe add a biohazard symbol or something you feel would mesh with the theme) in order to make the space feel more balanced. Not a fan of the icon placement, unless you did that for one handed use, in which case I think it's a smart idea.
>>58930087/10
I would love to see smaller icons (try MIN), but that's just my personal opinion. Neat wallpaper, good icon and widget placement, etc.
>>58927839.5/10
Is the arc at the top displaying battery percentage? It appears that you already have it displayed in text, so that visual seems unnecessary. I would personally remove it if it were mine to manipulate, but it's not, so you can make the call.
>>58927209/10
Font for the clock feels a little too cartoony if that makes any sense. Try going with something a little more serious and angular.
Mine has some obvious problems that need fixing, but I have yet to actually take the time to do anything further. Suggestions, comments, and criticism welcome.