RATE TO BE RATED. That's how these threads work, dammit!
>>54678306/10. Your text icons are all different sizes, with one of them hard to see in the wallpaper. If your phone is rooted, change the icons to white in your notification bar.
>>54677954/10. Not my final rating, since you're working on it. Do away with the notification bar, a minimal clock widget would work better. Make sure your icons match the weather, or if you can change the weather to be more neutral, because they clash with the background. Group together some apps to make it not cluttered.
>>54677956/10. 2 clocks, keeping the notification bar just doesn't work with your wallpaper and layout, you don't need it with the lock screen, especially if you have Widget Locker.
Mine, homescreen.