>>7345126the splatter effect on the clock doesn't work, the icon outline needs to be uniform, match the icon colour to the text colour, add some shadows to your elements like they're in the image, and match the clock to the height of your bars
>>7345039interesting. match the expansion of the rectangle to the appearance of the apps, even out the number of your apps, thicken the lines, pick a better don't for the clock, find a higher res gif and darken the background a bit
>>7344836stock. the very least you could do is to find an icon pack
>>7344042fonts and line weights don't match, also, don't be lazy - find a wallpaper
>>7344035the concept is okay, and that is all. pictures have nothing to do with one another. font, icons, layout, and colour choice are piss poor
>>7343698find them by looking, einstein. and when you do, congratulate yourself for the only thing you've done
>>7343692stock niagara with an ugly outline
>>7343279thicken your font, speed up the animation, and find a better way to bring attention to your apps
>>7343238fix your webm aspect ratio, change the clock font, and find a better background
>>7343209animation is okay, but you have a gaping hole in your setup, music shows too little information when minimised, and the navigation and status bar lack contrast
>>7342848interesting but a bit derivative. sideways text is hard to read and i am not sure if your fonts match
>>7342366it's not klwp
>>7342115like the style. change the way you display apps
>>7341976it's a "meh to pierce the heavens" from me, bud
>>7341380without a subtle difference between uncovered panels and the background the whole setup seems clumsy. also, stop using that font, it never really worked with anything
>>7341222clock is too large, looks clunky overall. look at more transit maps
>>7341214good idea. find a higher resolution of your backdrop, fine tune the digit placement, and match the colours. after that, add some functionality
i'm at 2k chars, sry
