>>65352697/10 - Pretty good, but I think a cleaner and lighter font would look better. I also think a slight blur effect on some widgets (particularly on the system stats, clock/calendar, and battery) would work better - it would ensure the focus is on the contents of the widget, while also maintaining the aesthetic.
>>65352107.5/10 - Don't like the calendar widget - the date looks awkward, and the days are too close together. A proper date would look better (i.e. Thu 07 April 2016).
>>65351599/10 - Almost perfect, just need a better font, one that's cleaner and simpler looking. Also not too sure the 'new phone, who dis?' is necessary, it'd look better without it, although it doesn't ruin how it looks. If you don't get rid of it, at least centre it.
>>65350136/10 - Not a fan of the wallpaper, doesn't go with the icons as well as it should. White icons generally work better with dark, minimalistic and landscape wallpapers. I'd also move all the icons except Groove down one space, and then put Groove in the centre top space, symmetrical to where it is now in relation to the others.
>>65348918/10 - Agree with
>>6535210, the AM should be replaced with a small battery, but otherwise it's quite good.