>>7220234here
>>7220237think about what you want on your homescreen, i like to make a list, and try to make it so that icons and the other elements balance eachother in the composition. since you have a noisy papeit might be hard to blend things in so making the elements stand out with borders e.g might be the way to go.
the desu and chan are placeholders for when i dont listen to music, if it is it displays music title and artist in that order, and its cute~.
>>7220244>changing out sayawew
make the gray area stop beneath the date form, so that it doesnt peek up on the sides of it.the app icons dont really fit with the rest
>>7220581bad font pairing
spacing is weird
and seeing that everything is centered the vertical line in the top box throws it off
>>7220624nice pape, the music title is a bit hard to read because of it though.
>>7220665consistancy, though you can make randomness work too, but its harder.
