>>7413791close the gap between your screen and the one you are copying. make it a better copy.
>>7413794what do you want me to do? add IMO after every sentence?
im trying to give the best rates as to what i think would improve the screen, if you dont understand what i am getting at then thats fine just ask
>Have no idea what the fuck you're suggesting about the dots, since that seems like a very arbitrary recommendationas the dots are right now they are a bit disconnected form the image, pulling them a bit closer would make it more say streamlined, less 2 movements fighting and 1 dominant line with accents.
>Also don't really understand why you think his font is bad, since you didn't explain that at all.i expect you to actually look at the thing though. even at a glance you can tell this font is fucked up, look at the r, t, the fucking 4, the shitty %, you can look at the kerning too if you want to dive a bit deeper. are you saying it looks fine?
>I find it just as shit as many of the images you've used in your homescreens. ok, i don't.
>Didn't you literally make a rice with random text placement?pic related? if you want to i can point it out to you, if its the wrong img then post it and i can do that one.
i don't really want to put more effort into rating than people put care to put effort into making their screen. I point stuff out and people can think about it, thinking about the things you are doing usually improves them greatly.