Slightly rearranged and tweaked mine
>>60019927/10 Nice. I like the central clock on the status bar
>>60020598.5/10 I like it, quite a lot of text though
>>60021138/10 Nice wallpaper
>>60024076/10 Not bad. I think it would be better if you got the horizontal spacing of the icons the same as the vertical spaces. Also the clock is a little hard to read at a glance
>>60025077/10 The jagged edges of those colours would annoy the hell out of me. Then again it probably looks better on a phone!
>>60026047/10 Nice idea, Not sure about the font for the time though
>>60026857/10 I really like this! I've never been a fan of text icons though. I think they make homescreens look quite messy