Made a couple formatting changes, but it's more or less the same. Still seeking critisim and advice
>>7253700Very original, and very well executed, not much to say. 8/10
>>7253702Why?
>>7253703>>7253704Just not doing it for me. When making a minimal wnite lines setup, it's super important that the line thicknesses mesh well, but these just clash. I'd say play around with some other widgets and icons, 6/10
>>7253721These can get a little old, but yours looks nice. I think you could get a gal and backround that match a lil more, 7/10
>>7253740For what it is, it's perfect. But, what it is isnt much. 7/10
>>7253744Nice start man, but you've got a ways to go. I would suggest either a more muted or a plain white icon pack, or a background that isn't so bright. 5/10
>>7253745Very prominent and consistent style, it's clear what this pape is meant to convey, and it absolutely delivers. Balancing form and funtion, this is absolute perfection, 10/10
If I didn't rate you it's because I already did in the old thread. Usually I only rate people who rate, but fucking nobody did, so I just went along and did it. I'll prolly post again later in the thread...
