>>62943584/10 - Not really sure the icon pack works with the theme, and that first screen that shows the time/date/battery etc. could look a lot less cluttered, I feel. Maybe get rid of the message that tells you the battery, and replace it with a proper 8-bit icon with the battery status in the corner. You also don't really need to be told the gestures, unless you're the forgetful type.
>>62947335.5/10 - Agree with
>>6294819 in that the aesthetic you're going for is quite overused, but it is functional. Also maybe replace your icons with solid white ones instead of the outlines.
>>62948097/10 - Probably would help if I knew Spanish so I knew exactly what everything was, but oh well. Not too sure you need the battery status on the second screen due to you having it under the clock on the first one. Could also move the clock on the third screen up probably one space.
>>62950466/10 - Not really liking the lack of uniformity in regards to the layout of everything, and i think the background of the icons and calendar on the last two screens should be a solid colour, probably the grey that's used in the sky on the first screen.
>>62950496/10 - Honestly not really a fan of this sort of thing, but you've done a decent job of it. Only main thing that bothers me is the lack of a proper wallpaper. I know it'd probably be hard to find one that fits that theme, but it just looks too bland without it.
