>>7360910I agree that the colour on that one looks ass.
Heres your rate, hope you take some of it to heart:
First of all, 2 clocks, 2 dates even (and the one in the status bar is stupidly small). Name of the day is illegible because of the small contrast, this goes for the icons in the center cluster as well. Internal spacing in the cluster is also very small, and could easily be made larger w/o any impact on the minimal aesthetic.
Overall i like the quick-music button but there are two issues i have with it; i don't really see the use for it on a 3 screen setup (i would probably get rid of the music screen altogether and just use the circle), and the placement is arbitrary and weird. It’s just "there": there's no rhyme or reason behind where it's placed, which is especially apparent when everything else is gone.
For the music screen, tighten the music controls so they fit inside the margins created by the box above; also move the progress numbers inwards to match. Again the song time remaining is impossible to see because of the overly light shade of gray. On the album art you should check the rounding of your corners, they might be the same value, but it doesn’t mesh visually. Personally i would make the border thinner. I also like the “next song in” which only shows for the last seconds of the song, though i find it a bit redundant to have both countdowns.
For your today screen, i would make the boxes white, which you did with all the other boxes but not these for some reason. The smaller icons suffer from the same issue as on the other screens. The weather elements for today, tomorrow and next are cramped, and could use some more internal spacing. I don’t really think the small circle left of the calendar justifies not having them centered.
Overall it’s a pretty good attempt, but the lack of attention to details and thought about placement, sizing etc. really detract from the finished rice.
>>7361806no u
