>>57539957/10 - Doesn't look too bad, just get rid of the shadow at the bottom, and maybe the notifications bar, if you can get a clock widget that looks good. Not too sure about the arrangement of the icons though. Use a mix of the blitz and holo icons, they work really well together, I was using those two for quite a while.
>>57539976.5/10 - Not really a big fan of that wallpaper, but whatever floats your goat I guess. Also get rid of the notifications bar. You have two clocks and it looks stupid.
>>57540347/10 - Not bad, wallpaper isn't really working though, because the main part of the image crosses the weather thing, maybe move it to the bottom?
>>57540477/10 - Everything is ok, I guess, but I find the font of that clock quite unattractive. If you can, get rid of the dock background as well.
>>57540508/10 - Very nice. I like it. Not really too sure about that wallpaper, though, but it looks good. It might look better if you took the wallpaper into photoshop and blurred the left side a little (not as much as the right). What's that music widget? It's not the default poweramp one, is it?
>>57541755/10 - The calendar doesn't look too good, and is inconsistent with the 8bit theme, as is the app drawer icon. If you can, get rid of the app drawer shortcut, and set a gesture to open it. And get rid of the shadows at the top and bottom.
