>>7634612the first three photos of this pape are perfect
>>7634613whereas the last three photos in this pape are perfect
because with this sequence of words a narrative is made that is somewhat linked to each photo
(for the first 3 and for the last 3 in each pape respectively and then this metaphor derails)
in the former image:
"remember" - ancient/classical sculpture,
"what" - the subject of the future they took
"they" - an indirect showing of 'them', an image of war
and in the latter image:
"took" - showing loss
"from" kinda irrelevant since it's a preposition, but this is a good place to echo what the 2nd image "what" described (such as the 1st image does with its picture of a beautiful lady)
"you" - an intimate portrait showing both smallness and togetherness that the viewer may empathize with
along this throughline of thinking, this image;
>>7634614could be reworked as:
"remember" - same street picture
"what" - moon landing picture
"they" - war picture (works even better because the soldiers are pointing)
"took" - cathedral picture; aka what they took
"from" - woman picture; sense of loss
"you" - new intimate picture
Alternatively you could swap the forest fire picture to "from" and the woman to the end to indicate a sense of looking back toward the ideas in the image, apprehensiveness toward whatever is forward of the woman
