I don't really get the point of this, but might as well.
>>1415072>weed anonDumb name, sounds like a placeholder. The rest of your description says nothing other than that they're overworked and really old.
>>1415139>purge/apostate anonAgain? Are all of your "anon"s names just titles? Why are they all called anon?
>knights of azazelThe goal of this cult is antithetical to what Azazel as a figure represents, although that's kind of a nitpick. Ignoring the implication that a single-sex species can be anything other than homosexual and the sole sex of their species, there's a clear connection between the interbreeding they can do and the "queerness" you're referencing that you're ignoring for some reason.
>heAren't these anons of yours a single sex? Why is this one a man, while the weed and chaos ones aren't?
>half elder god half siblingWhat?
>18th birthdayA veteran war machine that's been travelling across a setting as large as a multiverse for long enough to gain a reputation is only 18 years old? Even if you ignore time dilation and the notion that a city out of space-time cannot have years (no time nor planetary orbit to measure), that doesn't make any sense.
>drafted by several current and ex time godsI don't even know where to start on this one.
>azazel was just some guyWow, that's retarded. Some random guy wants to unravel space-time? Why? How did he even get involved with, let alone trick, an immortal and near omniscient race into a eugenics campaign? How is having people who could fuck up space-time for him killed conductive to his goal at all?
I can't wrap my head around any of this at all. This is beyond dumb.
>>1415170>HomestuckThat's enough of an insult already, anon.
As for the character itself, it's not terrible I guess? The design sucks though and looks nothing like what you'd expect out of what's meant to be a noblewoman. Why would the dragon wing on what seems to be some kind of Kobold(?) the same colour as the shirt and not the body?