>>887413Learn your tenses and participles and especially where to use what. You know, those triplets: take, took, taken, so it's "had taken", not "had took". Simple past of tread is "trod" not "trodden". Also while technically correct you normally don't tread into sth but step into it ("Oh fuck, I stepped into some dog shit!"), it's not wrong but I'd imagine it would sound a bit strange to most people.
>Poor of me.Poor me.
>I'd liked to have been bornI would have liked having been born
>I ended not doing much in the morningI ended up not doing...
>just kept sit in my backyard looking at my formely grubby sneakers get dryAll of that is happening right there at that very moment, so
I just kept sitting in my backyard looking at my sneakers getting dry
