Can you guys proofread my college essay?

Final Solution for the state of public education is needed, And It would sound harsh at first.

Let's be honest: We should abolish all kind of public education and replace them with online education services-Such as Khan academy, Udemy course, or Coursera-. Public education is on the way to its end; Students don't rely on school anymore. At this point, Facebook or even local community are better than school when it comes to offering a place for making social relationship. All the money is being thrown away on education, which is supposed to be invested in companies like Google deepmind, Boston dynamics, or SpaceX.