>>15801188Drop internal monologues altogether and work on less autistically transparent writing styles.
A narrator is fine but having characters directly spelling out their thoughts and feelings is shit-tier writing.
>Antagonist does something that would obviously anger the protagonist.>Protagonist in internal monologue: "That makes me angry">Character Y: "Wow when antagonist does that you always get mad!">Protagonist: "Yeah I'm so angry right now."Doing this leaves zero room for subtext/mystery/the viewer thinking and it's a curse that like three shows a decade manage to break.
