>>2091788I've been blinded!
>>2091840>>2091863Again, I'm probably not one to talk, but here goes:
-I think it might look a bit better if you lighten up the whites of her eyes.
-You left out the cheek marks/dashes (unless this was your intention).
-There's a smidgen of shadow by the crook of the straw (chin side). Only noticeable at 100%.
-The purplish/brownish part on her collar could use a shadow to match the shadow on the red areas.
Sorry, if you find this irritating, I've just got an eye for detail and these are the things I would change if this was my vector.
