>>2293319A lot of the dub voices aren't bad, they just need to improve the delivery and perhaps show some more emotion at times. Even Senketsu's voice was starting to grow on me, but it's still pretty early to tell if it will be good voice or not since only four episodes are out for the dub.
Also, good work with the fic, hope to see more in the future and I hope KLK fics don't just stop being made after the OVA airs.