>>3405485Helma's so cute..
>>3406118I think they're fine for what they are, some really ehh looking frames though that make me question why not trace the manga bit more for a better look.
Tanned Shirley and Erica's last frame looks really bad with the perspective and anatomy, as if they were drawn standing first and then chairs applied behind them.
But as long the gags flow well and slice of life comes across, it should be fine and fun enough.